Corrigé Epreuve d' Anglais

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Question n°1 : Il s'agit de produire la forme d'une lettre (layout) puis reproduire le contenu donné (commencez à partir de "On May, I ............... etc... jusqu'à la fin ". Faites attention à la ponctuation (notée sur 6 points à elle seule !!!)
Question n°2 : Il s'agit de rédiger un paragraphe d'une douzaine de lignes dans lequel vous expliquez la ville de votre choix où vous voudriez passer vos vacances on notera votre "essay" sur l'organisation de vos idées et la cohésion (utilisation des mots de liaison appropriés) la qualité de la langue utilisée (grammaire et vocabulaire) l'orthographe et la ponctuation.

Corrigé

1. Lay out the following business letter and punctuate it. Use capital letters where necessary.

dear Mr Parkman 85 Court Street Maysville Oklahoma on May 14 I sent you an order which included two white T-shirts size 36 when the shipment arrived I found that you had neglected to send the shirts I assume that this was merely an oversight in packing and will appreciate your sending me the shirts very truly yours Ralph Gray 14 Oklahoma Avenue Tulsa Oklahoma May 24 1981.

      85 Court Street Maysville,                                                            Ralph Gray,
          Oklahoma,                                                                        14, Oklahoma Avenue
                                                                                                           Tulsa, Oklahoma

                                                                                                              May 24th, 1981

Dear Mr Parkman,
On May 14, I sent you an order which included two white T-shirts, size 36. When the shipment arrived, I found that you had neglected to send the shirts. I assume that this was merely an oversight in packing and will appreciate your sending me the shirts.

Very truly yours,
Ralph Gray.

2. Use the information provided in the table to write a 12 line essay about the city you would choose for a holiday. Give reasons for your choice.

City	Population	Weather	Public Transportation	Major attractions
New York	8,000,000	weather cold in winter	Subway buses Taxis	Museums/Theatres / United Nations Building
Washington D.C.	800,000	weather cold in winter	Subway buses / Taxis	Capital Building Museums
Houston	2,000,000	hot in summer not too cold in winter	buses Taxis	NASA (Space Center) Amusement Parks
San Diego	1,200,000	reasonable temperature in all seasons	buses Taxis	Amusement Parks (Sea World) Mexican Border Zoo