Conseils et Recommandations


Exercice 1 :
Se réferer à l'exercice n°2 du writing (session principale de l'épreuve de Juin 1998)
Exercice 2 : Se réferer à l'exercice n°1 du writing (session de contrôle de l'épreuve de Juin 1998)
Exercice 3 : Bien lire les consignes. Il s'agit d'une lettre envoyée par Aïcha à son père.
        A noter les mots clés :
        * She tells her father about herself and how she spends her time.
        * She complains about homesickness and other things and doesn't want her father to worry.
        * She asks him questions about himself
        * She gives him some advice about his health, and how he should keep it.

 

Corrigé

 

1. Punctuate using commas and periods, and use capital letters where necessary.


  Native Taiwanese were forbidden to use their dialect in schools, in the government, or in the military  force. With democracy, things have changed. Taiwanese culture, which is distinct from that of the continent, has steadily gained in popularity among politicians, singers, and intellectuals.

 

2. In the paragraph below there are 4 grammar mistakes, 2 word-order mistakes and 2 spelling mistakes. Correct the mistakes in the table below text.
 

1 "A tenager from North China who smoked 100 cigarettes on a bet won his
2 wager but losed his life when his hart given out, "a newspaper reported.   As a crowd
3 of passers-by watched, the 19-old-year boy suddenly became pale and fallen on the
4 ground after finished the fifth pack of cigarettes. The young man was declared
5 yesterday dead at the hospital.

 

  

mistakes

corrections

Grammar
  1. line 2 : losed
  2. line 2 : given
  3. line 3 : fallen
  4. line 4 : finishe d
  1. lost
  2. gave
  3. fell
  4. finishing
word order
  1. line 3 : 19-old-year
  2. line 5 : yesterday dead at the hospital
  1. 19-year-old
  2. dead at the hospital yesterday
spelling
  1. line 1 : tenager
  2. line 2 : hart
  1. teenager
  2. heart

  
 
3.  Writing : Do not write more than 15 lines.
    A young lady who studies abroad writes to her old father who lives alone. The daughter tells her father about herself and about how she spends her time. She complains a little about home sickness and other things. Yet she does not want her father to worry about her. She asks him questions about himself and gives him some advice about his health and about what he should do to keep fit (that is to be in good physical shape) and not to be bored.
  
 

                                                                                                         Tunis, 2 June 1997           

         Dear Daddy,,

Les critères suivants seront pris en considération lors de la correction

Adherence to content
Organization (coherence and cohesion)
Fluency
Appropriacy
Language (Grammar - vocabulary).
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                                                                                                          Lots of love,
                                                                                                               Aïcha